All Comments on 'Controlling My Personal Assistant'

great concept, but feels very rushed. Short.

Master_Doctor Thank you for your very valid comment. My first and I think best story Beginning my life as a Dom was the opposite of this. I had a good idea and spent months refining it, eventually posting it seven months ago. In this time 10.5k have looked at it and 63 people have given it stars. This one 8.6k and 129 awarded stars in 4 days. It would appear that people read shorter stories. I'm hoping people who have read this will read some of my other works. Thanks again.

Agreeing with M-D.

Too abrupt changes. Just a little more depth, without getting all philosophical.

Am curious to the next installments.