All Comments on 'Cousins Ch. 01'

Bhuff, kudos on another winning theme. Cousins indeed. And redheads at that. I enjoyed each familial scenario but my favorite was the swap for the brunette. Consider the following a testimonial to your skilled writing techniques and attention to detail.

You often manage to surprise this jaded reader and always please me whatever the content. I loved the cousins but your writing had me fixated only on the brunette after her introduction. Of course my childish side wanted more of her but my pragmatic aspect realized one can have too much of a good thing. Had you written more about her my images of her that you provoked would have been stymied. Is not eh first bite of a chocolate the sweetest? Thank you for being the adult in the room so to speak.