All Comments on 'Cream & Coco Ch. 03'

The pace is a bit slow

You're dragging this out too long. It's past time to get to the meat of it. This whole story is starting to feel like word vomit.

I really don't like that you made Drew into a creeper with sexual assault.

You might have explained that this story took place in the realm of 'Having Some Brie', and was a continuation of that story. Because it's starting to sound like it is...

I also feel that since you are able to drop these chapters just a couple of days apart, you could have published this as a single work.

Too slow, basically nothing happened.....

You are a VERY good writer.

5 Stars, I don't feel it's too slow, days take days, you seem to write in real time. It's refreshing.