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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 1 year ago

1 star. Just because you’re writing fantasy doesn’t mean you get to be a lazy prick hound.

Why not include Scooby Doo or drag in Austin Powers? Or add Freddy Kruger? Or Batman?

Because it still has to make sense you moron.

Be honest, you got lazy. You are tired of writing so you just slapped this shit together and valued it a day.

Gfrank792Gfrank792about 1 year ago

well i guess thats one way to end a story XD

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Noah's Ark is FREE for a week or so. https://books2read.com/u/mlpLNM Things are a bit overly hectic ATM. Chapters will come out slower. maebelcredence.com

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