by Brooklynn__Sage
Yeah I liked it, it’s a well written story however considering how much you lean into cuckolding it’s weird that you misspelled the word. It should be in loving wives catigory, again nice start to story but probably needs to be resubmitted in the correct category with the spelling corrected, this is posted in the spirit of honest feedback and not as a slight as it is way better than anything I could manage.
Not one person in this story is either believable or likable. That's a death sentence to fiction. Nothing erotic, either, unless humiliating a mentally ill person is your kink, and that in itself, is telling. Not fair to even rate this stinker.