by dickthestick2011
The usual idiot story written by a half wit author with zero imagination.
Hubby has a small dick, is turned on by “an alpha male taking his wife and making her his”. Seriously, that’s almost all the stories here. Not to mention how ridiculous that plot is: if she belongs to another man, then why is she still married to the loser?
Femdom fantasy with the usual unrealistic submissive monkey husband and the inevitable negative readers rating.
You should find another hobby, anything but writing erotic stories! Maybe a how to book on hating yourself.
Ignore the haters who have not published anything on lit. However I am a little turned off on the self humiliation. Sex is about all involved have a good time and not the stealing of one’s wife by someone more masculine than the husband.
I am really enjoying your story. It is a little short, but it has a great plot, so I gave it 5 stars. I have read that the 2nd most searched item in porn is a man wanting to watch his wife fuck another guy. Probably mostly just fantasies, but there is a lot of guys thinking about it. So, I really do not understand all the haters. Please continue to write.
I love where this story is going. I too would love to watch my wife suck a big cock and to get fucked by a real man. I know that my thin pencil dick can't satisfy her, so she needs a real cock to do so.
looking forward to reading the next chapters.