by Birds__Eye
So glad to see that you have returned to adding to the series. I like the twist of Alice's interests and actions. And you have sowed other options for sub-plots. I still would like you to develop sub-plots with the various parents of the many girls interacting with their own daughters as well as other students, some in multiples with the couples. With so many ways to turn, you can make this into a novella if not a full novel with dozens of erotic chapters. As for my own preferences, I like more lenghthy narratives to include several branches off of the main plot.
Thanks for your efforts and for fleshing out the basic plot with so many possible options.
John
Love the story. Hope you can add more chapters soon. Too good for you to stop now! Thanks for the visions you've given us so far. You have no idea how much we do appreciate your efforts.
When I am your masseuse I am searching your body for your release, and I see they obtained Jenny's. Nice team work Dick and Peter.