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AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Imagination surpasses physical possibilities, but still a fun romp!

wysiwyg4allwysiwyg4all6 months ago

It's a good story. A few things you could of add a better intro on how all of this got started for example 1. the son been watching them have sex or see the gf master baking or the ff seduced him. You can also add in more about the dad as in the dad caught the son watching them have sex. 2. You need to add more detail about the character ms like their body features. How tall were they? What did the look like? Ho big arebtheir cock and don't put 9 inches because nobody really is that big. You want it more reality as possible. Are their cocks uncircumcised? Are they hairy? Do they have hairy asses? As for the gf how big are her boobs? Does she have a hair pussy? Doe she squirt? 3. The DVP could have more detail as in how did it feel rubbing against eachother. They could feel the cum inside her as she squirts, the son could be like I feel my dad's cock tip sliding, the tight fit was great. As he began to move in and out in opposite direction I can fee the tip of my dad's cock rub past my tip like it was a piston. When the dad cum in her the son could of said I felt him explode, it was pulsing and extra warm. Then the dad as he pulled out the son fet it slide out and he could here squishing sound and feel dad's cum running down his cock balls and ass hold. The dad goes in licks son cock eats thebgf and then toss the gf grab his kegs and pull the towards sons head and dad begins to rim sons hairy butt hole. Then dad get hard and inserts his cock into sons butt

There are manybseneruos here but if you would like to write a story with me let me know and we can do it together.

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