All Comments on 'Daddy Pt. 02'

Dreadful, way too much "Daddy". No man refers to himself as Daddy when talking to a daughter of that age. Immature nonsense.

"She should tell him, she knew she needed to." What's the point of having some internal dilemma dialogue when it never gets resolved or addressed again later? That line is just there for no reason.

Keeping the relationship a secret lowers the taboo of the story. Bring it out! 2*

Terrible use of the English language. Misspellings and incorrect use of words. Ignorant writer, doesn’t know the difference between shutter and shudder.

Oh Christ again this is a bit of a mess. First there are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. I know this is literotica and it’s all just fantasy but you’re telling me any vagina can take this much of a pounding and continue to cum INSTANTLY pretty much as soon as a penis has entered it? And that a man of 45 is cumming such a ridiculous amount of times with little to no downtime? Where is the foreplay? This is all just wham bam thank you ma’am.