All Comments on 'Dance with Me'

"One hands intertwined with his"

Did you mean one HAND, or one hand's, as in one hand is intertwined with his.

Didn't get past that point.

I loved it! 5 stars. Looking forward to more from you

I get that you were trying for artsy but your visuals were jumping around so fast that most were unseeable. To me you were in multiple positions at the same time. Not sexy at all. I won’t even complain about the lack of character development, plot, or conclusion as there were none.

Don’t slip on that wet floor.

I don't care about the wrong grammar. This was hot. Please keep writing