All Comments on 'Danny Discipline'

Clever premise.

Nicely told.

You need an editor/proofreader.

Would have been better with more dialog about the sex as it was happening. And how it felt to Danny and each of the girls.

Four stars.

4 Stars. Very well done, interesting point of view, disciplined punishment mixed with measured pleasure, witnessed by his family and friend. I'm hoping there will be a second part where Danny gets to totally satisfy not only his needs, but those of his mother, his sister and Kerri's also.

What a wonderful world.

Waiting for new chapters