by inyotefi
Whoa! I mean really WOW! I thought the 1st chapter was good but this one exceeded my expectations 10 fold. And to answer your question it was the perfect mix of story and sex. Dude you are blowing shit out the water with your DA in a way that cant be competed with, and I crave more please so bring on the next part.
Loved it. Great story mixed with great sex. Loved the mysterious way on which it ended, really got my tougue whet for chapter 3.
Very nice, well balanced and very hot. Probably one of my favs so far and you ended it on a cliffhanger that has me really looking forward to the next chapter.