All Comments on 'Dark Desires - The Game of Poker'

by JayStarr

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JayStarrJayStarrabout 2 years agoAuthor

Sorry if this isn’t great or anything. I struggled writing it, and I, honestly, wanted to be done and over with this story.

Doombot80Doombot80over 1 year ago

I wish I knew it was a gay story before I got half way through LOL!

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11about 1 year ago

This ought to have been classified as Gay, not Group, but I don't much care about that.

I'm more bothered that it made no sense and was little more than a list of poker hands and blow jobs. Author gave us no reason to care who any of these guys are, and gave us no insight into how they felt about what they were doing.

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