All Comments on 'Darkest Desire'

WONDERFULLY WRITTEN WITH GREAT CURVES AND DIPS. LIKED THE SEXUAL TENSION...JUST MAYBE A LITTLE MORE DIRECT WITH "HIS" SIZE AND "STEEL-LIKE" COCK...THEY ARE KNOW TO BE INSATIABLE AND VERY STRONG WITH THEIR SEX. MORE WORDING ON THIS IN DETAIL WOULD BE GREAT...GREAT LINES TO WORK WITH STORY LINE EXCELLENT. HONESTLY, THEY NEVER BECOME TIRED OR LOOSE THEIR ERECTIONS (IN MATTER OF SPEAKING); BECAUSE SUPPOSEDLY THEIR COCKS ARE OF "BONE" MATTER NOT FLESH...

SYLVIA "J"

I just love this story, now you see what you've done?! I'm all hot and bothered! I hope to see another installment to this story.

Goodness!! Its just started to turn me on and its the end?

I know it has been a couple years,but please tell me you will continue this wonderful story.

This is also my darkest desire, but from a male point of view. I enjoyed your story and hope that someday you'll return to write more.

Wow I love how she was able to come across what she wanted most. I love how the story was told.... How I wish I'd know when, where and how her Michael would find her again.

It would be interesting to see how he finds her and how long. Very good start!

very good story though i yhink it would be very interesting to find out what happens between them.