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Getting up to her quivering legs, Elliot went right to the window, not at all caring if anyone on the street could see her butt naked. She watched Damian walk back across the street, out of her home, out of her life, back to being just the neighbor.
The Dalmatian didn't look back to her once as he left, like he was silently telling her the choice for how the story went from here belonged to her; she had the power to let him walk away, go back to her old life as if nothing had ever happened. It didn't take more than a second for Elliot to make up her mind.
Elliot's fingers nervously found her necklace, sticky and soiled in feral Animal sperm, and fingered it anxiously for just a moment. But just as quickly, her grip tightened thoughtlessly around the trinket and pulled it up over her neck. She didn't even bother looking at it as she merely threw it onto the floor by her bed.
The fallen wife's hand then quickly dropped down to the base of her pussy lips and she groaned as she slowly, agonizingly traced it up the still super-sensitive skin, feeling sticky strings of lingering semen still clinging ruthlessly to her slit, making sure the Beast's mark remained seared into her body.
Elliot brought her finger to her lips, relishing the final taste of the first night of her new life, and as she turned around to begin fixing the damage her new lover had caused, she smirked wickedly as fantasized about her future. It wouldn't be long before her next 'Date Night' with Damian.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoHaving read part one, I immediately had to move on to part 2, and I wasn’t left disappointed at all. The author has a good general grasp of language and pacing. The story is very well written and exciting to read as this human wife submits to her primal need. I even got those few extra “anatomical” descriptions I’d been craving in part 1 which was a great little bonus!
My only minor gripes are that there is (in my opinion) a slight overuse of the word “smirk/smirking” etc. It was similar in part 1 and seems to be something of a habit or “go-to” term the author slips into using. Either that or everyone does actually smirk as a default in this world. Also, the idea that human women submitting to and being red by beast cock (certainly a sexy idea to be sure) as “the natural order of things” is really explicitly hammered home. The subject of the writing and the events male it clear enough that the author (and eventually the protagonists) think that it is a beasts “right” to claim human pussy, “as it should be” claimed. Explicitly stating this idea one or twice would be okay, but “as it should be” appears repetitively in the text, which I personally found to be labouring the point just a tad.
I would I’ve loved Elliot to have resisted just a little at first, still clinging to the notions of morality and obligation, despite her anger and rising frustration and pheromone induced need, whilst Damien enjoyed teasing her more and more before “making his move.” They said the text is reasonably long (tho it doesn’t feel it when reading) and maybe the author can be forgiven for cutting out the “tease” and going straight to lusty submission on the human woman’s part, in the interests of moving the action along.
I love how Elliot’s conflicted emotions are dealt with in the aftermath. That feeling of residual lust, shame and guilt will be familiar to many a cheating woman, as will the “reminder” of what she has done given by the throb of a slightly bruised pussy. I also loved to little nod to cuck-culture that was the cum splattered gift/jewellery.
Can’t wait for part 3!
