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komercjankomercjanabout 2 years ago

I am betting his sentence is 6 months

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

useless, boring chapter I repeated

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I first came across the story at part 6, and I liked it so much I went back to the beginning of "The Journey of David and Becky" and read everything from there onwards. I can understand where some people dislike these stories; they are a "slow burn" and there is of necessity some repetition.

I'm interested to see where this goes. I strongly suspect it won't end well for David, and I wonder if he will realise in the end whether Becky really does love him or has just used him for her pleasure.

Thanks for your efforts in writing these stories, and please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

now i really don't have a clue why he would go back to the whore he married after he gets out of that hell hole time to go home pack his stuff and get the hell away from that slut i know he likes humiliation i a sure he can find that with a better woman than his slut that he has now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

you have a great story going here the strapping is good when will he feel a taste of the cane and surely you will have him grow some balls and leave the slut he is married to after all she has done to him making him carry the bricks three times what a whore and i might have told Tilly to whip my ass instead of licking hers

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

God I love this story!!!

GamblnluckGamblnluckabout 2 years ago

I have some ideas for how you can follow up this 'book'. Unless of course you drop David down the toilet altogether. send me an email for a plausible continuance or ending.

Al_AnonAl_Anonabout 2 years ago

This is what I was expecting more of. David getting treated unfairly simply because it would amuse some sadistic woman.

I hope at some point he fails at some impossible task & 'earns' a punishment. Doesn't matter what it is, though I'm a bit biased towards contradictory instructions or something where he'd have to pick a favourite guard -and thereby 'disrespect' the others.

I'm also more convinced than ever that Becky is planning something big for David. No idea what, but I'm sure she (and/or Gina) is going to love telling him.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, when I was asking about not giving in to days of boring stuff while David was a prisoner, I did not expect to be jumping ahead so far. Last time David was around day 11 and now he is at 45 days? That is quite a leap. I was wondering about the chafing on his ankles and at least there has been a few applications of antibiotics given. I expected a lot more issues of chafing as well as more outbursts of him losing his mind due to boredom. It is amazing that he has not been abused a lot more, as the guards put it "just for the fun of it". I am amazed that what Tilly did was not done more often. I certainly would have given him 29 swipes of the cane just because it was his birthday but it seems that something else is going on. Why are they being so easy on him? I guess it is no wonder that he gets tired and beaten but still gets a woody? Of course he will go back to his lovely wife and still get cuckhold even worse. He does not seem to deserve any better in life. Still they have not made him wear a cage either. It would have been better if he wore a cage with shocking capabilities just for the fun of the guards. Maybe when he gets out of the prison. I would hope that Becky and Liam will be waiting for him at the airport and then make David watch as they fuck each other on the way home.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It's interesting that Becky has been relegated further and further out of the story. There are far more women in David's life, than there are men in Becky's life.

william48william48about 2 years ago

The original reason given by Madame Popescu for David having a long stay at Casavana was so that the girls could have have a prisoner they can really punish, someone who is imprisoned with them for a few weeks; for their pleasure and recreation. Sadly, the girls apart from Tilly, do not seem to have taken any advantage of this and the main punishment seems to have been boredom. Even when they have him at their mercy while he is carrying the bricks they just leave him alone to get on with it. Perhaps they are just not as mean and nasty as Madame Popescu thinks they are and the paying customers are being defrauded

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

if Becky wants to have 300 bricks moved then let the slut come and do it herself tell the old madam to send her a message that she can go and f&ck herself the whore why does she get any say what happens to David she is the slut that got him sent there time for divorce when he gets out

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Okay who’s taking bets about how long it’s gonna be? I reckon 5 years

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