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Click hereShe had been glancing down at the ground frequently as she told me all this, and it was only as she finished that she looked up at me with a hopeful smile on her face. That smile and her silence seemed to last an age as she studied my face. My penis size was changing with every sentence she spoke, and when she noticed it swell from its semi erect state to a more upright and solid state, she knew she had me where she wanted me.
"I want you to be insanely jealous of Josh. I want you to be sick that he's getting everything you're not. I want you to lie awake at night unable to sleep, thinking what we're doing to each other's naked bodies in our bed in our warm comfortable home while you're stuck here. But I don't want you to worry that me and Josh will come to anything more than a slight diversion that I'm using to both of our advantage."
She studied me some more before standing up and coming right up to me, my erect penis brushing against her coat. "I love you, David, but I'm going to leave you now." She reached up and kissed my lips gently and sexily. "Josh is picking me up from the airport tomorrow and he's taking me to a nice hotel for a three day break. It'll coincide with your three days hard labour; it's so fitting, isn't it? I was so turned on by watching you being caned this morning, but I'm saving myself for Josh tomorrow night when we get to the hotel."
She gave my penis one single caress. "I will see you in three months, David." She walked straight out the cell leaving me totally dumbstruck.
Coming next in chapter 3: My three days of hard labour result in more humiliation, but maybe some hope.
- COMMENTS
Assshalmost 2 years agoThis just getting sad it was supposed to be a game but his life is destroyed now friends family evrything.
Secondly Becky never told David about josh in advance and neither had David's permission when he bought that chick from casino Becky punished him because he hid the fact and this must be Becky's turn.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI really hope David ditches Becky. This story is becoming hard and unsatisfying to read. What went from a seemingly fun and loving relationship spiralled into a pretty sadistic power trip for Becky. Reading David receive literally not a thing through each part of their story just wore thin. And honestly this chapter just kinda tipped the scales. I was all in for their “game” but now David is in a prison for a sentence that was Becky’s fault and is being quite literally tortured while she tells him to his face she has something good with another guy and they are gonna be on vacation while he does labour. The game went so sour and I really really hope David gets a happy ending where he gets back at her and has a good life because his character is so pitiful I probably won’t return to this story for quite a while until I can see the final chapter to see if something good finally happens then I would read the rest. It’s honestly a little to sick to continue reading until then. So much potential in their story until becky became a horrid gross thing out of left field.
xIntrusionxabout 2 years agoI get that the book has been written at this point, but I have to say I’m a bit exhausted of the prison arc by this point.
It was solid, it served its purpose, but it’s only 2/3 done and it’s feeling long at this point.
I’ll keep reading because I’m addicting to knowing how this will play out, but I’m just itching to see him free again and able to actually live a life instead of being trapped because of what was quite frankly a nonsense start.
Futafemdomabout 2 years agoI know it's like creative license and he seems to enjoy this or whatever. And, in a temporary situation it is hot, but I really hopes this ends with Becky getting her comeuppance, David finding boundaries, and if need be David finding a woman who knows how to play better. Honestly could you let us know if it ever goes that way? I really don't want to stay around if it doesn't
william48about 2 years agoI am sad that you wasted so much precious space with the back story. If anyone has got this far in the story then they know all that.
I am losing faith in David ever growing a pair and saving himself from the inevitable disaster but Becky the bitch is living up to my hopes
