All Comments on 'David and Becky - Foolish Choices Ch. 07'

Ok, its officially become ridiculous, I'm out.

Sorry, but this just didn’t make any sense. Is he really that stupid ?

First to comment. Can't imagine this one is going to be popular with the readership. Expect some angry comments.

I enjoyed the story but it needs something new now. Nine months of beatings is getting old , at least with women in prison they seem to have more to do by this I mean use in strip clubs, training as pony girls, and other things which makes the fantasy stories more engaging. Thank you for your effort and I did enjoy most of the series good luck in spicing up future chapters.

Now the story has gotten ridiculous

Dudeee wtf this is just sick i am finally done with it. Thanks for this

To be fair, OllyT has always put in a preamble that the events described in these stories were neither realistic or believable and that is definitely the case with this one. Unless this is a "dream scene", at least we know how he intends to stretch this out for another 14 episodes. Whether he can maintain interest for that long without a lot of new and different twists in the plot, which has been much the same for the last 10 chapters, is another matter

This is just getting stupid, I'm out

This is fucked up now it's just is. It's not 3-4 days it's 1 year no sex!! Kya 1/3 of the punishment increased!!

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Okay im done with the story i was so looking forward to prison ending i will check back only to see if its a troll and he is actually being released

crap absolute boredom, repetitive boredom, I only read the end of the chapters. YOU ARE BORING

Seriously? This just feels like pulling this arc.

It's like he hasn't learnt anything in the last arc and is still a useless fk. What is the point of showing he's angry and torturing him for so long if you are going to turn him into a simp all the same?

Goodbye Cassie I guess.

I can already see this story ending with him being a chastised slave licking her boots as she has fun with every man she can find.

So much for redemption arc. . .

Well written, but getting to be unbelievable.

OK well at this point I think we’ve officially jumped the shark.

PLEASE stop dragging out this prison setting. He has paid his time, and this whole situation is just officially insane (if it wasn’t before).

It was pretty unbelievable up until this point, but now it’s borderline laughable. I’m really not tying to be mean, but come on now. Volunteering to stay an extra 33% on a sentence like that is eye-rolling.

I think this where you have jumped the shark.

In all honesty, this development is beyond the pale.

This is just getting pedantically drawn out now and you're ruining what started out as a pretty good story

What kind of a fucking idiot is this wimp he should tell the whore to go to hell and go and find Cassie he doesn't need this slut dam but he is stupid

Nope.

This is easily the stupidest thing I've ever had the displeasure of reading. I have been wondering if there is something that could be worse than that garbage manga of Rent a Girlfriend and this, manage to go above and beyond that

Hey surprise surprise, he didn't get released. Well who'd have thought that......

Oh wow, Becky is so searingly sadistic! 😍 I hope she shows up to taunt him about his extended sentence :D

In weird way I sort of feel free after this part. I no longer see him as a victim and can now see that Becky was right all along. I no longer care what happens to him. So I don’t need go read anymore. Thanks olly it was a fantastic story for the first two parts. I can respect you wanting to it your own way. I was one of those people who was constantly complaining while reading every part the morning it was released. The main reason why for me is that I was genuinely disturbed by the cruelty seen towards David and I wanted to see if there would be a happy ending for him. I guess there won’t be but that’s okay. It sounds foolish to admit but even hours after reading your stories I often end up thinking about them, not in a nice way. Which is proof of your excellent talents as a writer. Sadly this just isn’t my fetish anymore, it’s just too cruel for me.

This is such a great story and theme, every chapter, every book, has just left me wanting more, to see the constant downward spiral, with such creative humiliations and conflicting contrasts. As much as the story is quite a stretch into the fantasy of it all, surprisingly it comes across (to me anyways), as quite believable and possible. For instance, there's a certain amount of "normalcy" that mixes with the sadist torments and clever humiliations that provides just the right balance. In the latest chapter the prisoner has become so lost and caught up in the power of his spouse that he himself chooses his own fate, a decision that I'm anxious to see unfold for the next duration of his sentence. I'm a fond reader of female domination, where there are "contrasts" between the players. There are so many contrasts that continue to pop up, which I'm sure is the goal of Mrs. Emerson, to continue to dream up cruel and devious ways to increase her pleasure while having the opposite effect of Mr. Emerson. I hope that there's many more chapters, another book or two, and, of course, the surprises that continue to happen. My favorites - the hard, monotonous, boring, long labor detail, the caning performance with the pop of the bubble gum and a crowd in attendance, the genuine tease and taunt from every seductive female, and every time there's 3 knocks....oh boy

I don’t even know how to react. This is so stupid. At the start I was so excited to hopefully see him released but now I’m checking out. I’ll come back to this story to see the title descriptions in a couple months to see if something good happens. And for the love of god bring a redemption arc into this so he smartens up and leaves her ass. This went from a fun read to irritating.

Well this seems pretty in line with David the addict.

Well ~ this chapter has finally pushed this insanity into the absurd. Unfortunately I won't be around to read that when he "finally" gets home he will crawl back to Becky and begged to be locked up in his chastity cage immediately. I guess the continuing / final chapter will be in the Sci Fi category because any semblance of reality has now been eliminated. I had reluctantly been holding out hope that when he returned home at this point he would have thought back to the brutal beatings, the unbearable loneliness, and the assorted elements of deprivation and not even walked into his house but rather told her they were finished and he headed out to find Cassie. Oh well ~ good became fair became poor became absolutely unrealistic. Too bad, it was good for quite a while.

Hoping this is a dream or a mindfuck. If it’s not, you just murdered your story. The prison crap was overdone in the last book. Now extend it? You wasted all those parts of your story where he was angry at Becky now that he’s agreed to this. Agree with others (if this is not a dream or mindfuck) you jumped the shark. Clown world.

Oh fuck this story. Done. Didn’t even bother finishing the chapter. Going back to vote 1s on every chapter and encourage anyone who truly values femdom to stay away. This story is garbage. You just destroyed any chance of redemption. I’ll never read another word of your trash.

Perhaps it's a good sign for the author that Mr Emerson is exasperating me. It would mean that I care what happens to him, yes? No story needs to be written to please me or fulfill my hopes, it needs only to be written as well as the author can manage. I'm going to give this one a rest for a while though. Whatever our Olly needed to say with the prison time I am confident has been said. The chapters are so short that when I check back in a week or two it won't take long to catch up.

Dude...... its getting equal parts boring, frustrating and silly. Of all the unrealistic the that have happened this is by far the stupidest. Please tell Me that this story wanders back in to some realm of sanity?

Thinking on it more, I was a bit harsh in my earlier comment. I think my frustration mainly lies in the fact that the prison setting has taken up soooo much time already and I’m eager to move on to what comes next. I know eventually it has to end, but I would just prefer it be sooner than later, and we get to see how Becky tortures him while he’s free.

THis story has gone off the rails. YOu had first made him intelligent but with serious fetishes.

NOW he is one of the most stupid character imaginable. Three extra months??? No way.

HE might have broken down and bawled. Yelled and screamed and got caned and sent home with a freshly welted ass. But not this drivel. Is it just to have a story line to drag it out.

3 more months? After 3 months she will request we are planning to have a baby so keep him there for 9 months wtf??!!! Atleast he must try to sucide at this point this is not femdom this is just pure evil !!!

And you might ask me why i read this coz I want justice this is not right he needs some form of redemption and Becky needs some form of punishment as well it must not be just one sided

This is bullshit!!!

Here is more realistic and alternative ending for chapter 7

When he gets to know Becky reasoning and request he collapses and thinks about the choose he made till date and comes to the realisation that she is just a bitch and he request madam pope to release him in 4 days

Day of release

He feels the fresh air the calm weather and the beautiful sunny day and thinks life was unfair to him but now it's all done and dusted and finally he can see some hope so decides to meet Cassie

Done! Look olly ? What do you think too human ? Real ? nature? I know you have a evil brain but have some heart give this man some redemption

Bro that's ridiculous. At least make it somewhat more reasonable.

What is going to happen in three months? is Becky going to ask the fool to volunteer to be castrated and be her eunuch? And he accepts? that is not too far out there considering how you have twisted his personality.

It would have been realistic for him to return home and maybe get with Cassie while Becky finishes her three months.mwith the new lover. Maybe screw with him during that and twist up his emotions. THIS? Just stupid.

i used to think he was a wimp to put up with Becky and her shit now i know he is lower than a wimp to bend over for the whore time to tell her she can keep Josh forever and find a new woman and he should be going home not staying 3 more months just so Becky can screw Josh for 3 more months i think all the whippings and canning's have affected his brain and it is now DEAD stupid wimp

Out of curiosity, why are so many of you reading sadistic FemDom erotica when clearly that isn't your thing? To those of us into totally evil fantasies, these developments are unimaginably sexy. Keep it up OllyT!

Someone else asked "Out of curiosity, why are so many of you reading sadistic FemDom erotica when clearly that isn't your thing?"

Well I'd say sadistic FemDom erotica is my thing, unless the story arc is totally stupid, in addition to already becoming repetitive and boring.

Really great OllyT. These guys can write their own story if they do not like yours. I love it.

This is where I bow out. I like reading about femdom as much as anyone else here, but this...this is far too much. I hope divorce is the endgame of all this, and David can get some therapy after all the abuse he's endured from Becky. Nothing wrong with femdom, but this dude's gone so far into subspace with no hope of ever coming out, I won't hesitate to call him mentally impaired at this point. He needs help, and only therapy will work at this point. Oh, and divorce'll work wonders for his mental health too.

I will say that this, like most of your other chapters, was very well written, so kudos to you for that. That being said, I think it's gone too far now, and David well and truly is in over his head and so far gone that he needs help badly. I hope that's how this story ends and that David can find a more healthy release for his femdom fantasies. He deserves better than Becky and I hope that's how you decide to wrap up your story, OllyT.

Done. Outta here. Unbelievably STUPID to volunteer for 3 more months at Becky's request! UNfuck her!

What a lame twist has this story been given! He just stands there and agrees to remain in inhumane conditions for another 3 months?? Lame-o!

have finally reached the end of my rope with this story. The story had so much promise at the beginning. The story has become as erotic as a root canal procedure. The guards are even bored with it!

The Foolish Choice was one I made over and over again when I clicked on the next installment.

Farewell Dave! Farewell Becky! Farewell Popescue! Farewell Cassie! Farewell Elana! Farewell Gabriela! Farewell Tilly! Farewell Isabela! Farewell Justin! Farewell Radu! Farewell Josh! Farewell to all the rest of the menangerie! Signing off now! J.