All Comments on 'Dear Random Soul Ch. 01'

Bravo, A really good story. My only problem is it's a little short but that's a good thing.

More Please!

Yeah. Get free of your wife and dont look back

for WHAT reason?

Nothing happens except that the wife lays some stereotypical shit on the husband. Nothing original. Nothing real.

What you should do is recognise you are a lousy fuck but that she still loves you, despite that. You should offer to lick her clean when she comes home from a session with him.

Go on with Maria ;)

3* for now...This can happen...what will he do? That's what will make the difference in the story...

According to the survays the cheating is 55% for wives. The husband's figures are 60%.

Your choice is clear as your wife pointed out. Stay married as long as her fucking around stays quiet, or leave if you have a closed mind. Face facts cuckold. She is hooked on real man meat. She needs it and craves it. She is honest enough to stop cheating on your and come clean. Now if your a big enough man to sometimes fuck sloppy seconds or eat her pussy with all that stud cum in it, then stay. My bet is that the idea deep down turns you on. As a stud, trust me, I do not want to take her away from you. Have no desire to steal or marry her. I just want to use her from time to time, and she needs the drug that I can supply. Do you know that 60% or so of married women cheat on their husband and most more than once. That the husband never suspects or ever finds out. So even if you dump your wife and marry another, more likely than not she will cheat on you too. The odds are stacked against you cuckold. And it is not your fault that your cock is so "average" as you put it. lol So that is your choice cuckold. Make up your mind

I think SleeplessinMD4 has some really good points which the author should consider.

I do hope that the story does not end up as another cuckold wimp husband being humiliated by his wife.

There is so many stories on this site for that theme.

Where a husband slowly takes charge and replaces his wife with one worthy of his heart is my suggestion.

Once a wife loses respect for her husband then his life is over in the marriage.

I have left a comment on Ch.2 which is relevant to this chapter as well, ie free pussy !

She may a big dick and will choose Thor over her husband. Then this should be a wake up call to the husband to replace his wife.

One thing I have learn in life is girls who have a bad girl slur past do not end up with a good looking stud man. As he does not want to bump in to her ex's or worry that is going to stray in the future. Sluts are fun to be with, but not for marrying, starting a family with. A slut normally marries below her as that is the only type of man that will have her. So how does she deal with this sub standard husband, oh yes, she cheats on him !

you should if you can share his cum! DIPSHIT!

Stop writing..

Give me a call. I'll put that Thor out of his misery and end the problem. Oh, and get rid of the fucking slut.

Now back to reality. Interesting dilemma. Makes me think. Hurry up with the next chapter.

The story begs to be finished right whether in right life or in fiction. I have never understood the attraction of the cuckold lifestyle. This story highlights the problems with that lifestyle perfectly. The wife in this story has no respect for her husband nor is she trustworthy. How can she after 1 year just confess that she has been fucking her old boyfriend? It is clear that she married her husband with the idea that he will accept the situation and now she breaks the news to him to (a) relieve her own guilt and come clean about her actions and (b) to force him to accept the situation. There are some exciting paths the sequel can go. First storyline- the husband can take charge of his life by opening up the marriage so that when she visits Thor he can try some strange either women at work or through social organizations. He needs to prepare himself when not if she leave him. Second storline can have the husband divorce Maria and put in place a live-in contract so they can both date others, enjoy each other as long as it lasts. Third storyline - the husband just leave taking monies and other personal items starting over without any further contact with Maria. This clean break would avoid all of her drama because if he stays she is going to have him sucking Thor's cock and getting him fucked in the ass to meet "her needs". Fourth storyline - the husband "accepts" her cuckolding him with Thor but he take actions to build a separate life away from her. He would take a male contraceptive or use condoms, move monies (it is not clear if she works) out of harms way, and start hobbies to meet other women who can replace Maria in his heart. He would let her intiate sex, talk about counseling he would need to fully accept the situation and stay out working late. He would pretend that nothing has changed except his desire for sex is decreased when he think about her and Thor. He can also get info on Thor just in case he wanted to take legal/other actions against him.

If you have to ask you are a dick sucking little boy bitch, no wonder your slut wants more, like a real man. Why did she marry you?

story was fine. I suggest you try to add backbone to each character to make them believable.

My tendency is to believe your story is more real than fiction. My advice is to pack your trash and move on. If you decide to move on be smart about it. Also you need to understand why you married a woman like her. Your choice of a partner seems somewhat self destructive. Good luck.

you have to remember you can buy toys to help you in the bed room she a hoe and love it.

Your story is well-written, with excellent pacing, dialogue, and internal turmoil. Keep writing! However, if you are seriously looking for advice, serious advice is: end it now. Look beyond hot sex with a gorgeous babe. She will never be an equal partner in your marriage: look ahead to vacations, your work promotions that might take her away from Thor. Your family, friends and coworkers will find out, and won't understand, and will shun you. And together you will never raise normal children normally, and they won't develop healthy relationships with the opposite sex, nor understand what parenting and a family role model is all about.

No woman would tell this to her husband.Just silly.Not worth much comment.

Dump her, it will only get worse but once she is gone it only goes up from there.

How is that even a question, she loves someone else and picks him over you. Kick her out.

Dump her as fast as you can. If she is fucking Thor whats to say she isn't fucking somebody else. Her feeling for you are not there regardless of what she says. Get rid of her before she gives you a disease.

Hey its only been a year no kids. And by the way if you had a kid how would you know it was yours? Cut your losses, you could sue her for breach of contract (she was fucking him all along, its not like she strayed, she was a cheater from the got go). Kick her to the curb and find a loving woman not a slut.

WOW 102 comments in less than 2 days is impressive. To the extent they answered the author's question they all said to dump the bitch - leave anything but agree to her demand. This should have been part 1.

Get rid of her immediately. If she loves you she would not need anyone else

Her sorry ass to the curb and let his fucking cock be her solace in her old age or other times when she needs something besides a big dick...Then shell figure out what she has lost..Maybe shell commit suicide. That would be a fitting end to someone so shallow

get the hell out or just shoot yourself as you will a;ways be worthless or just shoot him you are dead anyway.

have her come home and sit on your face. You will learn to love it.

If you have to ask the reader what to do, you're beyond hope. Just another lame cuckold story that's been dominating loving wives for way too long. As pointed out by another reader at other stories, Lit needs a category called Cuckerotica? More fitting for the dribble that's being thrown into loving wives. Well writer, you're getting a lot of advice. Are you going to take any of it or once a cuckold always a cuckold. I would bet on the latter.

I think you should have her tell you how she wants things to go from here, while she lovingly strokes your cock repeatedly to the edge, saving your release until you agree to support her need for his cock. You should ask her what she wants: does she expect he'll want to come over to your home now that you know, does she want to dress for his arrival and greet him at the door, does she want you to wait in the living room when he's only there for a short visit or the spare bedroom when he stays overnight, does she want the three of you to have breakfast together in the morning where you have to see the two of them barely dressed and teasing one another right in front of you, etc? Keep us posted.

You need to divorce the bitch and find a woman that will be happy with your cock size.

an opinion on what you should do,,,,, i know, stop writing! enough bloody wimp-ass cucks on here allready.

You find this guy , you cut off his bigger than your cock, you put it in a gift box with a pretty little bow and give it to her as a gift. and then you look her in the eyes and tell her you got a gift box for him too...........

@ Anon Oh my Gawd Your advice is the most humorouse. I think the comments should get any stars too, not only the stories!!!!!!!!

Man should intentionally get an STD, keep it quiet, give it to his slut and then gets treated and laugh his ass off as she gives it to "big dick." Now, that is really funny. Maybe "big dick" dick falls off. Of course he claims he got STD from his wife and divorces her.

She might surprise us all... But you can not live with this relationship. The author claims he does so that would make him a masochist....

If this is real you need help big time. It is important to teach people how to treat and act towards you to help make you a complete, proud, and worthy person. If you cannot teach her to treat you as you believe you deserve than separate before the obligation of children arrive to complicate issues further. Find someone that will treat you as you believe you deserve and of course honor, dignity, respect, always apply to both members of a relationship.

... to hate. The very idea that advice is needed in a situation as described in your story is proof positive that your, er, your character's nightmare is just beginning. In other words, happy cuckolding.

Just another WACC

Several things are self-evident if this story is based on the author's current marital situation. The wife puts her own needs above the husband's, which indicates she does not truly love or respect him. She broke her wedding vows soon after getting married, so she can't be trusted. And this was not a drunken slip, but rather a long-term relationship, that clearly means more to her than hubby.

I believe that the man in this story (the author?) really needs counseling. Anyone who lacks self-esteem in this fashion will continue to be a victim until the downward spiral ends with tragedy, unless help is sought. If an open marriage is what both want and entered into consensually, that's one thing. Each can have partners and self-respect with variety and equality for all. But in the current scenario, Maria is not asking permission. She is telling hubby this is how it will be, he has no choice.

Well, he does have a choice. He can accept it and be a slave (taking what few scraps she throws his way), or he can leave. The latter may seem hard, but in the long run, it's so much healthier. A tetanus shot hurts, but it's better than getting tetanus. Staying in this so-called marriage will mean constant pain and heartache; best to end it, be sad and lonely for a while, move on, and find someone else who truly loves him.

1. At one point, she told you "if you can think about my needs for a change." She implies that you are a self-centered lover, even when you say you were loving her gently. Are you timid in the sack? Because every woman responds to confidence more than timidity.Has she ever told you before there was a problem with your loving, and what have you done about it, or is she just using that phrase to justify her behavior?

The answer doesn't really matter, though it might help you in your next relationship.

2. Why does she have the right to tell you that you only have 1 day to decide about your future? Are you living in her house? Are you driving her car? Because if not, she doesn't have the right to limit your decision time AT ALL. She has taken over a year to determine that she can't live without Thor, in spite of the way he uses her. Well, you have the right to equal time in order to determine if you can live without her.

Don't get me wrong: I don't think she loves or respects you at all, so I don't think you will ever again be happy with her. So in the long run--and maybe in the short run, too--you need to split up. But you clearly provide something she needs, and that's why she wants to keep you, and will sing you some song and dance about her feelings for you to ease your pain. But in the future your relationship will always be on her terms. So if you crave her abuse the same way she craves Thor's abuse, you will lose all respect for yourself if you continue to let her dictate the terms of your relationship.

I agree with every one else: BTB,because even cuckolds are entitled to some self-respect and should be in the relationship that you choose. You guys are usually manipulated into continuing to provide security for women who don't deserve it. Emotionally mature, responsible, attractive, available women greatly outnumber the same in men, so Maria is far more replaceable than you currently believe. You do not have to live in a relationship according to her terms.

From now on, she will respect you exactly how much you respect yourself.

so you can lick her clean when she get home.

The Author wrote in his biograph:

"Regular guy in a strange relationship. My wife, who I love unconditionally, has cheated on me several times. This fact tortures me, and turns me on at the same time. I write fictionalized versions of real-life events to help me cope."

So we try to give advice to a willing cuck.................

YOU HAVE TIME TO TRY A NEW RELATIONSHIP WITHOUT THE INSECURITIES OF YOUR PRESENT ONE.THERE IS NO KID SO WHY WAIT.

Simple. Burn the Bitch. Just toss her out. She obviously never loved you. And move on with your life. That's what I did. Or, like someone else mentionned, be her doormat for the rest of your life.

her needs need to be on the street with the lighting dude. TK U MLJ LV NV

Keep her its only sex.The sex might last an hour but you have her for life

Because she didn't give you a choice, she gave you an ultimatum, slapped a one-day deadline on it to give you the bum's rush and she exploited your love for her to do this.

That would be my response if this were a real person. However, it's not.

I don't like this story format, because it's a lameass way to walk away from your story without giving it an ending, as if there were anything confusing and controversial about the evil way this guy's wife is acting that required an open-ended query to the reader.

Sounds like an extremely desperate and pathetic way to dig for comments, actually.

"But, if you can be open-minded and think about my needs for a change"

Wow. I cannot imagine her saying this with a straight face. Well, I take that back. Someone so profoundly selfish would say it and mean it. This is so far beyond erotic or even enjoyable to me.

Wow - 75 comments on a story that asks readers opinions on what to do about a cheating slut wife. Now normally I don't get too upset about unfaithful wives, but Maria is not only unfaithful, but deceptive as well. There is only one solution, divorce her and move on. The pain will be temporary, unlike the living hell your life will be from now on if you stay with her.

gift of honesty you say. Honest would have been telling him before she became a whore. You my friend what's known as a cuckold. Fuck the slut, move on. They've only been married a year. Dump the whore and find yourself a woman. Not a slut, not a whore but a woman. And as far as supporting her, tell Thor to make sure he gets her a car and then to get the oil changed.

Divorce her slut ass and move on. Duh! Unless her pussy is 24 carat solid gold... actually, it doesn't matter. Kick her to the curb and regain your self-respect with the help of a good woman. Hell, it worked for me.

Unrated, since this tale doesn't seem to be over yet.

Damm, the shoe size matches the IQ analysis - just another cuck writer who should be on that shit site, Dark Wanderer instead of Lit.

Maria has given you a true gift by being so honest with you. She has revealed her true feelings and has even graciously offered you a choice; accept her growing needs and support her emotionally in her fulfilling future or considerately agree to leave and support her financially from a distance.

Did you, Nick_Nice, write and post paeans about the delights you experienced in (or around) her pussy? I'm NOT seeing them on your story list!

But you do have an elaborate and poignant tale of the distress you've just suffered. The pleasure was substantial (+6), but the pain is excruciating (-10!)

Math rules! Size-Queen drools! Staying is for fools!

4*

I guess you can count on raising Thor's and Maria's kids. I wouldn't be at all surprised if Thor move into you place and you are relocated to the guest room. I think Maria is a still a bad girl and at least she was upfront with you on everything. The ball is in your court.

Subtle, not so much. Humorous, sort of. If you had your hand in a fire and asked the readers what you should do, that would be more subtle than this story. And funnier.

Well hell, you might as wear your "BIG GIRL PANTIES" now, order your french maid's uniform, and get used to the taste of "THOR"........

OR

MAN UP, and DTB!!!

How about a chapter 2 in which your protagonist first castrates Thor and then leaves his 'ex-' wife.

Let her do as she wants, as long as she pays equally to support the household. And reserve the right to fuck around as much as you want to. first get a count of how many times she was with whats his name and play catch up. Then treat yourself to a lovely affair.....

Tell her to go to Thor. She will be the one coming back after she gets lonely. You start looking for your true soulmate.

Simple answer. Don't let the door hit your ass as you're leaving. Enough said. Best of luck in your next marriage.

What a stupid question,! The only solution. Is to kill the bitch.

What is there to be confused about?

She doesn't understand love or commitment. Leave. Find someone you can trust. The alternative is eternal misery.

She uses you; that is the condition. You supply support like a sucker. That is a condition. You let her do what she wants. That is a condition. You have no self respect and need counseling. Has she suggested that to you? You wife is selfish and you let her ruin your life. That is masochism. You do have a choice. But you sound so deep in your neurosis, without help you will never escape until the day she comes home to tell you she has someone better than you, richer than you, and certainly and obviously better in bed than you. Your life is doomed. And please do us all a favor and do not have children. The girls will learn to be like their mother and the boys will grow up with a terrible example and probably none of them will be yours. Unconditional love only works when it is reciprocated. Clearly your wife is not capable of this. I dare you to share this with her. She would laugh at you and probably admit it was all true. Let us know here if grow up. How? Write a story about a man who finds real love and a partnership with a woman who actually loves him more than herself. You are certainly not married to that woman now.

If this is Not a Story, Then i would say she is Pretty stupid to Risk a marriage, that Seems to be a Good One... She could have been honest with you, about what she craves in sex from time to Time... You could have found a Way together to fulfill her needs. But to Lie to you and to say she Would Chose a cock over her husband?! Do you really think you could be happy in such a relationship, Where you take Place behind a cock? Not another Person but just a cock?? It's up to you what you can live with without making yourself unhappy.

Wishing you all the best

S.

same old I'm a willing cuckold crap.

let him fuck you too.

Marriage is about love, trust, respect and sacrifices. If she can say to your face "she lovs sex with him better" there can be no trust, if she can sneak out to fuck him again and again she wont sacrifice for you, if she gives you the ultimatum telling u she prefers sex over you then there is no love. It would be best for you to cut her loose so she can enjoy all the "big dick" she wants, and all the lack of love that comes with it. Have ur marriage annulled and walk away, it has only been a year or so you can find another woman who is on the same page as u are. There are other things to consider as well if she fucks around with a stripper, how long before she picks up and passes along to u an STD? how long before she mistakenly has his child and you are forced to raise it as ur own? even if Thor disappears from the picture how sure are you that she wont just find another big dick? Just leave for your own peace of mind, the woman obviously doesn't love or respect u as u deserve and she wont sacrifice for u either.

She broke her wedding vows,lied and cheated on you from the beginning. She already said she loves him more. Why wait until he decides to take her away from you? Why raise his spawn? She doesn't love you; she loves her place in life. Find someone who loves you. You deserve better.

You may feel that you can't live without her, (assuming this is actually asking for advice and not just a story) but if she will not commit to you as she agreed to then you certainly will not be able to live with yourself if you don't try. If you were at all likely to just accept it you wouldn't even have written, since your 'night' to answer may already be gone by the time you read this I have to insert: She may be a great lover, but how much satisfaction are you going to get knowing the reason she is so accommodating for you is that she was 'trained' that way by her little Thor? If you made her any extra promises and said you'd stay; you're just as constrained by this as she was by her marriage oaths... and you didn't include Thor in your little verbal contract to each other did you? You may come up with some sort of comprise such as seeking something on the side for yourself, but many of those types of relationships come down to split loyalties, which may be good for you as hers seem skewed away from you to her "big" fetish. Giving your attentions to another may just make it easier to leave her in the end or it might allow you to rationalize it in your mind, I can't conceive of a situation where it would make your relationship any stronger than it was the moment after you learned about your wife's activities with Thor. So many stories go in for a scorched earth policy with the (ex)spouse, which I think is great in stories but leads to all sorts of real life problems if you try them. Now, if I were to assume this is just a story; It was quite well written from a first person perspective and very it was certainly thought provoking.

if she's a size queen, and has found a steady extra large dick-fix, you will NEVER win.

cut your losses, and get the hell out of Dodge

yeah, it'll hurt for quite a while, but you'll find someone to replace her in your bed eventually.

or, you could stay, and have your ego and self esteem utter destroyed by a hurt that will NEVER fucking heal as long as you stick around.

the choice is yours.

Like an erotic Dear Abby!

Keeping in character, remember to thank Thor for the STDs!

She doesn't love you , dude (whether in real life or the character in this story). In the story, they were only married a little over a year, so you might even be able to get the marriage annulled. If you love her so much then turn her own ultimatum back at her. Tell her you will only be married to a one woman man. tell her that is what you thought she was or at least could be. Tell her you don't mind sharing a pussy, as long as it is one you don't have to be married to. Then keep fucking her, and taking your sloppy seconds, if that is what gets you off, but at least you are protected. And later after Thor gets tired of her (he NEVER wanted to be saddled with her full time, or she wouldn't have married YOU), if you are still friends with benefits, then your benefits might increase. Meanwhile you stay on the lookout for a woman not spoiled by a big cock, and who manages her self-esteem by being PROUD to be a one-man woman. Since you all ready divorced (or annulled) bitch #1, you are free to pursue a lady who might actually be the love of your life instead of a cheating whored-out gash who is so self-centered, she never will look beyond her own reflection in the mirror when making a decision in her life. Like everyone else has said. Protect yourself, and get free!

Her and let Thor pay for her wants and Needs and look for someone else away from where she is Staying. even if it involves Moving. that way she cant corrupt any new Relationships you Develop

UNO ESTRELLA FOR THE EFFORT

You'd think that authors would read comments on other stories and realize that people (readers) HATE unfinished stories. You may see it as a way to be clever, but let me be clear - WE (the readers) DON'T THINK SO! Finish your damn story or we're going to get Finishthedamnstory to do it for you!

"Are you crazy?" she asks the man she is married to. Well is this husband crazy? The responsive question is one of disrespect. Her values are clear. She would rather be fucked than respected or loved. There really isn't any room in her life for a loving relationship, is there?

My advice isn't necessarily to BTB. It is clear his wife is not who he thought she was, even with a "bad girl" background. This husband does need to ask himself if his "soul" is worth living in a disrespectful relationship where his wife "tells" him what she will continue to do. There is no loving partnership. There is no contract before God or the courts. Besides his soul this husband needs to think about his mental and physical health, which Maria clearly doesn't care much about either.

Does this husband have any real options other than to move on?

Find a woman to love that loves you in return.

He should kill t he cheating whore and cut Thor's cock down to a nub. If he gets caught he might spend a few years in jail, but at least the bitch would not be cheating on anyone else, and Thor would never get anymore pussy,

It appears he has 3 options. (1) He can stay with her and continue to let his cheating selfish wife have her affair. (2) Stay with her and have his own affair. (3) Leave her cheating ass to be with big dick Thor since she loves what he does better.

Since she doesn't care if he stays or go the answer is simple...go with option 3. He won't have to stress himself out about her. He definitely need to man up and don't continue to be her wimp.

kick the slut out to the curb if she had any love for you she would not cheat

This question gets all the BTB anons on side with their comments.

So if your character is asking our opinion then it's obvious what the majority want to see happen. However, before I add my suggestion let me ask this: Besides sex, what else does she do? Does she cook gourmet meals? Is she an experienced carpenter and can renovate the house? I mean what is about her that he loves more than his own self respect because so far, all I see is a woman who wants hubby to wait for her while she fucks another man.

Her words make it clear she loves Thor's cock more than she does him.

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Also, there's her words of "think about my needs for a change." Nothing about his needs. Her's are paramount.

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What is there to consider? She doesn't love nor respect him. All she cares about is herself.

Damn. Is there an answer to the question? Dump the bitch.

I love her can't be without her so what if she is a whore slut bitch cunt. What crap. Grow up be a man and throw her ass out.

Its apparent that she has already made up her mind. There are other women who would appreciate a decent respectable guy. If she wants to be treated like crap then you should still care enough for her to wish that she gets her dream - even if you are not it. Just be thankful ur not married with 3 little ones.

As a writer I am sick of these cuck wanna be wimp loving wife's stories each writer should take a good look at his self before writing them because other then the small amount of fans they have. All they receive is ridicule and disrespect from the readers.

Unless they want the humiliation and get off from it

Dump the bitch.

your writing is half decent.I'm not commenting on the content, as it doesn't float my boat. But hey, whatever you are in to. Keep writing

NO ENDING ARE YOU TRYING TO OUT DO JUST PLAIN BOB TRY AGAIN STARTED OFF GOOD AND THEN JUST LEFT IT IN THE AIR

The question shouldn't even need to be asked in real life.

Absolute garbage! What is he her meal ticket? FUCK OFF til you can come up with a decent revenge story instead of a fucking wimp like this loser.

You can keep fucking her after you are divorced and before you find a decent woman for a wife. You made a big mistake marrying a slut. Now you have to dig your way out of it. There was no mention of any kids, so you are far ahead of the game. Just remember, she doesn't love you, no matter what she says, shit, she doesn't even like you or respect you! Of course, how could she? She clearly does not have any self respect. Yes, sluts are bad people. Lying sluts are worse. Stay away from them all.

You have got to be kidding me any husband worth his self esteem would kick her to the curb! I know my husband would. Ann

stupid story and even worst are the idiots that comment on this idiot story and that include me.

cut his dick off and leave...lol