All Comments on 'Dear Susie - Letter 01'

I was perusing the column of choices when I saw, "Drmaxc" and knew that my Sunday morning would be special. This story has so many possibilities. Possibilities that only you can do justice to.

To do have a wonderful way with words and a lovely story.

Looking forward to reading the next installment

Anna

The way you captured the essence of a giddy ingénue enjoying the attentions of four charming gentlemen is truly remarkable. It does make me wonder about their back story, how did they all decide to travel together? I’m sure more will be revealed in future letters which I hope will be arriving in the mail shortly. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

Lovely story! Captures “girl talk” nicely. I imagine some double penetration in the offing. Nice bit of teasing about the olive oil supply!

Loved this story and so well told from the point of view of sweet innocent(!?) Jenny. Although used by the four elderly gents she knew what she was in for and seemed to take great delight in providing it.

It would have been interesting to know how she got involved in this scenario and what the back-story was all about. However that is just a minor criticism/ request.

I’m looking forward to reading the next instalment on the letter, but as she is already on Day-6 when she wrote the first letter I fear we may miss some most of the first weeks incidents. Did she take on more than one gentleman at a time eg spit roasted? Was the olive oil used for more than just tossing the salad??!! That would be hot to read about.

How on earth do you keep coming up with all these ideas and settings, how to tell the same basic story and still make it interesting, and unique probably. I also am amazed that you can write this letter supposedly from one eighteen year old girl to another and as one reads we can hear her giggling away as she writes, that my friend is storytelling. How many stars would you like.

Were you an eighteen year old girl in another life? How could you mimic her writing style and cute comments so well. Telling the story in letter form is a new twist. Never saw that before. It will make the chapters more meaningful and exciting to look forward to. Looking at the comments below gives a great sense of how much your writing style affects your readers. Rarely do I see such lengthy reviews of an authors work. Keep 'em coming.

Finished "be my guest" so I thought I would reread "Jenny's letter to Susie" still amusing, an entertaining read.