All Comments on 'Debbie's Adventures Ch. 04'

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Poizon69 over 14 years ago

Once again good chapter of the story.

Debbie is really going for it isn't she? Well keep writing the story. I like how you have taken a fairly naive young woman and turned her in to a very shrewd sexy woman. Anyway you keep posting and I'll keep reading.

Anonymousover 14 years ago

Another "An Opportunity Not To Be Missed".

This is like "An Opportunity Not To Be Missed". Great premise with the old reprobate taking advantage of a young beauty. But how about a detailed description of what Debbie actually looks like, you haven't given one. Still great story though.

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