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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great build up...

But then you lost traction and got impatient for the action. Spend a little more time transitioning from reluctant blowjob to anal fucking and it'll be pretty much perfect. Grammar and spelling are great, it's just an issue with the build up

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Just an art student with an active imagination. Most of these stories are fantasies I've thought up and am finally putting to paper. All work is purely fictional and doesn't reflect any real person or event. Please enjoy!

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