All Comments on 'Decor Ch. 04'

I feel like Kara should be more pissed at her sister and mother. They both knew rick was her enemy but chose to be his decor., like she shouldn't be that forgiving to them. That's just me though. Great story love to see what happens next

Hello reopain. Thanks for the feedback, glad you're enjoying the story.

Kara's anger is more directed at Rick and the fact that he is manipulating her sister. She did give permission to Jenny to hang out with Rick again to benefit from his wealth, which she is kicking herself for, but she's not going to blame Jenny for making more money, which she believes is the reason.

Kara’s mom is oblivious to everything between Rick and Kara except the fact that they don't get along. As far as she knows, Rick is a friend of Jenny’s. So Kara wouldn't be mad at her for something out of her control and Kara knows its mostly an opportunity for her mother to bond and spend time with Jenny.

That being said, if Kara knew Jenny's true feelings about the job, she would have had the reaction you were expecting.

As soon as it was made clear that her sister and mum were in Rick’s office the sick twisted creepy arsehole factor started screaming Warning! at me.

Then on top of that Kara‘s goes and sexually assaults the girl working at near her fiancé! Presumably it’s him who’s been a moron and stolen a freeze camera.

The thing with her mother and sister had me confused too particularly since Rick’s reversion to fucking creep from polite colleague. If they’re aware doesn’t that mean that they know now he’s put them in a humiliating pose.

Overall I suppose this is just another retelling of the saying of “Power corrupts, absolute power corrupts absolutely”

I’ve got very mixed feelings about the whole story, not sure if it was this chapter but OMFG WTAF?!? regarding the poor girl being peed on in the men’s toilets AND the bride to be just being used. It starts as titillating harmless fun and leads to sick sex games. Just the thought of it makes me feel nauseous which by the way is not a reflection of your writing technique. For the most part it’s very well done (Some random spelling & grammar issues) it’s just the actual content that’s unpleasant. I only kept on reading to see how things pan out for Kara.

Tess (UK)