All Comments on 'Decumeron Ch. 01: Wed March 18 2020'

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BigBeanieBigBeanieabout 4 years ago
Good...

...but on the short side. It was over by the time I'd got into it. I feel you could have taken chapter one on to include the inevitable awkward conversation the following morning , and then made chapter two about the first couple of 'events' that occurred as a result of the conversation.

However, that aside I liked your imagination and style. I hope you continue the series.

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