All Comments on 'Delusional Life Ch. 01'

really stupid

No sense makee!!

Different, kinda weird, but not bad overall, and definitely not bad for a not English as a first language writer. I’ll keep an eye out for when the next chapter comes out.

Wow, that encompassed all the best descriptors usually put forth here.

Trash

Garbage

Dumpster fire

Stupid

Train wreck

Horrible

Dumb

Idiotic

Worthless

Septic tank reject

Need I go on? Seriously reconsider ever writing again in the future. Or at least meet a real woman before you try to put one to paper.

Thanks for your constructive feedback ... Its not easy to sell reality to world. You may ignore these things by pretending to be living in a perfect world. I am sorry , if i disappointed some and I am happy if i related to others. The 2nd part is out... Read the complete story please before hating anyone.

"What happens when you marry a "Polyamorous" person to a God-Fearing conservative person?" - Um, why would they get married? Because they're in "love?" Love CAN'T conquer such a divide. It would be like an Orthodox Jew married a strict Catholic. Marriage is tough enough, already requiring compromise, there's no need to add roadblocks.

Painful read.

Did you notice the question "What will happen when a person believes in Polyamory married to" Monogamous "person?" is idiotic in itself? Why would such a person marry a monogamist? It seems to me you have just as little understood the meaning as I do not understand the meaning of this story!

Dear sbrooks,

Their marriage was hush hush affair. As Keith said, his blind love and lust for Mara overcame any rational discussion. I am sure they did not discuss open lifestyle before marriage. As for Keith it was never supposed to be a big deal.

Really really stupid.

OMG tough to get thru, as it is tough to understand, doesnt flow great, but the story has a kernel of intrigue. I think this is going all wanton housewife controlled by her alter ego, with husband cheering from the sidelines, oh well.