by LiminallySpaced
A stunning conclusion to this riveting drama leaves the reader on edge wondering what is going to happen next. Well-written, with excellent characters, this chapter has plenty or romance to go with an excellent plot. Five stars.
This story just keeps getting better and better, keep up the phenomenal work!
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Very erotic scenes, especially the finale of the chapter. As usual, I'm looking fwd to where this goes and the other various plots
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Very erotic scenes, especially the finale of the chapter. As usual, I'm looking fwd to where this goes and the other various plots
Seriously, I think you are the most accomplished writer on this site. Pacing, plot, character development all far above 96% of everybody else’s submissions. Thanks.
I really enjoy your writing. It is well paced but also provides great detail for a good buildup and excellent erotic results. Your English is great, proper structure and spelling for the most part, so it is really enjoying to read. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading all your stories and hopefully you will write more. Well done.