All Comments on 'Dirty Little Secret Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What an asshole.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love this story! Can’t wait for the next chapter :)

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShitover 2 years ago

It’s well written and edited. I like how the primary viewpoint shifted, from her to him, between chapters - it seemed to add some much needed depth. Clearly there’s more going on than simply training a slave, because he wouldn’t need to block her memories just to train. Is she his first slave? He wanted a young woman, so it’s safe to assume that he already has an idea of how long he’ll keep her. Then what: will he seller, snuff, her, or just leave her on the side of a road somewhere?

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