by VCDC
I was so thrilled that Jordan dumped her husband and the story should of ended before the m to m. 4 stars
The M to M killed an otherwise good story. Gave 4 stars. Would have been 5 except for the MTM.
You killed a great story with the ending!! Would gave given you 5 stars, but you only got 3 because of the ending.
Have to laugh at the guys who freak out at M2M sex. That wasn't the problem with this story. The problem is that it's just a mess, all over the place like a dog's breakfast. It's not erotic because it's so rushed and disjointed and never gets a good vibe going.