All Comments on 'Discovery of My Sexual Utopia Ch. 02'

by civalsavage

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Erotic

This is an erotic tale of a loving couple and I'm looking forward to future installments.

ohioohioover 17 years ago
great story so far

I like the combination of the sexuality with the love and concern that the partners have for one another--looking out for one another's feelings. That makes the story unusual, and very enjoyable.

I hope there will be more soon!

ohio

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
cheese

I buy at the grocery. This 'account' is rife with phoniness.

PattyMariePattyMarieover 13 years ago
More please

I hope there's more to follow. This one's me hanging.

GloryGuy2GloryGuy2over 13 years ago
Please continue

I really enjoyed how you put this together. Now that you have taken both of them to their own personal extremes, it's really unfair to leave the reader hanging. You have so many alternatives! As another writer on this site, I would add my words of encouragement in asking you to pick up your pen and put words to paper... so to speak.

Cheers.

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