All Comments on 'Diving In'

Beautiful

So intense!

Thank you

Very, very good, although a tiny bit of polishing would make it even better (for example repeating the word 'pussy' four times in a short paragraph is a little much, no matter how much we love pussy).

Still, much more importantly, the chemistry between the characters is sizzling hot. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I’m loving this slow burning story, I I’m really looking forward to the next parts