All Comments on 'Dom Takes Brat'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good premise.

But sex is all too mechanical. To automatic. No tension.

Flies ahead to completion instead of taking its time.

Needed mush more teasing. By her. By him. With dialog.

Two stars.

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