All Comments on 'Don't Cum, It's Dirty! Pt. 02'

being led a merry dance by a scheming, controlling woman. You men never learn do you? Fantasies like this just expose your vulnerability to exploitation, wise up!

She's selfish and hurtful and if he wants sex, he has to put up with it. I think he needs to take her out and give her a strong spanking.

at least she is not completely heartless. ^^

He should take what he needs. Use her body to satisfy himself. Again and again.

Love how this story is developing. Keep up the good work!

yes please! write more with these themes! keep going with the story!

There is the beginning of a good story here. Keep up the good work! The woman (otherwise heterosexual) being altogether repulsed by natural male ejaculate is a little "over-the-top", but it fits in well with the general narrative.

Premise still OK.

But sex isn't really erotic.

Three stars.