by dont_wake_me_up
OH MY GOSH THIS STORY JUST KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON!!!! FOREVER A FAN......
I really enjoyed this submission, but the poor spelling and grammar are very distracting. :)
as i said before, i never wrote erotic lit before so all this is new to me. somehow the comment from the unknown reader from USA gets to me lol so i promise to do better. thanks for ALL feedback
brilliant, really it was. please please please make another, im begging you lol. its hard to find good storys about a black woman these days, but hell if this wasnt the best ive ever read ;p
great story.cant wait to read the next chapter.i love that kenya was still very spice and in all still being classy and a virgin!what a twist to her tough and naughty complexcion.dont keep us waiting too long =]
Can't wait for the next chapter. Interesting twist.Email me if you need editing!
This is one of those wow stories. The girl had a boyfriend who knew that she had not been shagged. I guess I wasn't the only one. This is good, are you going to finish it? I hope so. I bet she feel the same way about Adam as he does about her. I knew something was going to happen because they acted like they couldn't stand each (red flag).