All Comments on 'Don't Wake Me Up Jus Yet Ch. 02'

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ebony_divaebony_divaalmost 16 years ago
FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

OH MY GOSH THIS STORY JUST KEEP GETTING BETTER AND BETTER PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON!!!! FOREVER A FAN......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
well done!

keep em coming and maybe make the submissions a bit longer :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Entertaining...

I really enjoyed this submission, but the poor spelling and grammar are very distracting. :)

dont_wake_me_updont_wake_me_upalmost 16 years agoAuthor
thanks for the feedback

as i said before, i never wrote erotic lit before so all this is new to me. somehow the comment from the unknown reader from USA gets to me lol so i promise to do better. thanks for ALL feedback

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
wow

brilliant, really it was. please please please make another, im begging you lol. its hard to find good storys about a black woman these days, but hell if this wasnt the best ive ever read ;p

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
wow!

great story.cant wait to read the next chapter.i love that kenya was still very spice and in all still being classy and a virgin!what a twist to her tough and naughty complexcion.dont keep us waiting too long =]

raunchyrareraunchyrareover 14 years ago
Very,Very Hot!

Can't wait for the next chapter. Interesting twist.Email me if you need editing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good!

good story please coninue

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
WOW

This is one of those wow stories. The girl had a boyfriend who knew that she had not been shagged. I guess I wasn't the only one. This is good, are you going to finish it? I hope so. I bet she feel the same way about Adam as he does about her. I knew something was going to happen because they acted like they couldn't stand each (red flag).

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