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Click hereGood thing the kids were making all that noise outside. I'm fairly sure no-one heard us at the same time.
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A/N -- Thanks for reading. Hope you enjoyed.
- COMMENTS
Killerjayy3 days agoSimply amazing! My kind of stories, there can always be lust, but it takes that special relationship for love, commitment, trust and spending the rest of their days together! I guess I have an old soul, while all the lust and making pets is hot, love will always get my heart!
granoldad10 days ago10 STARS
Best loving story I have read on this site.
The realness and emotions tell a tale of pure love that anyone would give their lives to have. Growing up with no siblings or mother intensifies the regrets of never having this much love in life. Very well written.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoA classic. One of my favourites by one of my favourites. Bitches like Simone really do need to die in a fire. Hard to believe people like that exist and do the shit they do. Glad everything worked out for Mark in the end and he found not one but two wonderful lovers to give him everything he ever wanted.
Anonymousabout 2 months agoA bone line story ? if thats not cheating......... Almost docked you a star ! Great story ! Thanx !
K_S_B9 months agoGreat story. I swear this guy can't miss. I've been reading his stuff all afternoon and I haven't read a bad story yet.
sd31r2010 months agoFor me, a GREAT story! I loved the set up/back story. I think in enhanced the story after returning to the Present. Great balance of love story to intimate paragraphs. I look forward to reading more of your work
My best to you and your family.
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Mfkndragon11 months agoI have to agree with a few comments I don't see why you felt the need to have the judge sentence him for that long in prison that part wouldn't have done anything to hurt the story if it was a shorter sentence or house arrest with probation for a few years
Kerrion11 months agoDouble Trouble indeed, though with a title like this, I would have expected the twins to be more bratty. I also noticed that they were more like one person hosted by two separate (though identical) bodies. Always acting together, always "we", always acting as one... where my personal experience with twins have shown that while they love their similarities, they also tend to forge out differences between each other in order to be their own person. The way these two were, I would expect they have the same job for the same company doing the same thing, driving the same kind of car, liking the same foods, same drinks, etc. etc. etc. As to other things, I loved the way you wrote it. Character driven and not just sex this, sex that, sex the other thing, and oh... btw... SEX! That gets soooo tiring to see in so many other writers stories. Definitely one of my favorites. Keep up the good work!
Aussie195111 months agoAs well as Derlichs. Still it was an enjoyable ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ read for me…
shadracht12 months agoIt's too bad he had to go through the pain that he did, but it did set the stage for him to be isolated from other women long enough for the twins to stake their claim.
Great story.
