All Comments on 'Downtown to Home Fun'

I like this fantasy also and you did a decent job with it. Your writing seems a little rushed and that means we don't get to know the characters very well. It's always better if the reader can relate.

Also, I see I am the first one here. The "tough" guys should be along soon, to call you wimp and tell you your story is cowardly and ridiculous. After they read it all the way through, of course.

Just hope you get to experience the real thing one day.............I have and beleive me it is better than any fantasy!

he is a queer

It took fifteen years, but you're a wimp, and your story is pathetic and ridiculous.