All Comments on 'Dr Jackal and Ms Hyde'

Really interesting story! Hoping for more.

One remark, you seem to have confused the chromosomes men have XY and women have XX. So for a man to lose the X chromosome would be really weird.

Be nice if he hooked with a lesbian and maybe he became a she Male with a bigger dick and hooked up with a lesbian to take his cherry

So much proof reading required that, perhaps, you could get both Simon and Marc to help. Maybe they could edit, a bit, while reading it for you.

Al be it vs albeit is the blip that jmost umps right off the page.

Perhaps this might have been more realistic had you been laid before writing it.

The concept is fantastic, especially for those of us that remember Bruce Banner ripping through all those clothes each week on TV.

I will join countless others watching for more . . .

What a great concept and trigger. It makes you wonder that if this were possible, how many people would play around with it?

This is a very fun concept and well done. Wouldn't that be wonderful, being able to switch at will?