All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 31'

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TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthorover 1 year ago

Amazing story. Glad you can get them out as fast as you do. Thank you so much for your engaging stories.

tejingtejingover 1 year ago

The action was nicely done. The reversals were interesting and made sense physically, though by my personal taste, there were perhaps too many of them. Still, nicely done.

Halia's decision could have been better explained, though, and her dialogue is a bit off. Why did she suddenly just throw out the fact that she's a virgin? It's nice to know (though attentive readers already knew), but it didn't fit the flow at all. Regardless, I'm looking forward to Leo claiming his paladin.

I'm also intrigued by the approval of Sherida. I hope you present an answer before the story ends to what dungeon builders are and how they relate to the various gods.

tejingtejingover 1 year ago

Why doesn't Jindag have a 3rd unique monster girl? He has one per glyph, but what about the one he should have inherited from whoever he took his second glyph from? Or did he start with 2 glyphs for some reason? Or get a glyph in a different way than taking it from another builder?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great episode, great story arc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fuck ya! You go leo!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Dude i cant stop reading. Excellent

Aussie1951Aussie19515 days ago

This is your best chapter by far in my opinion .why, because there was a storyline to it that had me entertained. You don’t have to have sex sex and more sex in every chapter gets too boring. Well done. My first ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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