All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 02 Ch. 37'

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CortavarCortavar12 months ago

Keep going at it, dude, you've hit your best stride in a while with the last two chapters.

Switching to Terra's POW was way better than the previous times we were given snippets of a girl's mind. Somehow, she felt more rounded as a character, especially as a newcomer.

You're progressing as a writer, it really shows. You were good, you're getting better, keep at it! Now I can't wait for the next fight or SFW plot development to see whether it applies there too!

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