by mypenname3000
Keep going at it, dude, you've hit your best stride in a while with the last two chapters.
Switching to Terra's POW was way better than the previous times we were given snippets of a girl's mind. Somehow, she felt more rounded as a character, especially as a newcomer.
You're progressing as a writer, it really shows. You were good, you're getting better, keep at it! Now I can't wait for the next fight or SFW plot development to see whether it applies there too!