All Comments on 'Elaine's Indiscretion Pt. 06'

This is just plain ridiculous, period. Just a crappy story line, throwing marriage in there for attempted effect but really just pathetic sceneries to just have sex. No ounce of realism, not sense of marriage values, remorse, self-control, nothing. It's just empty. Sex that's it, the rest of the attempted story is just filler.

Thanks for writing and sharing. I know it's hard. I have 3 stories in prep and cant seem to get them to a point that I'm ready to put them out there for others.

I'm interested in seeing where this goes, though I have some pretty good ideas, but I also think you've misnamed the series. It should be "Elaine's Indiscretions", emphasis on the plurality of "indiscretions."