All Comments on 'Elle's Adventure Ch. 12'

it is nice that there is some conflict, life is like that. And even more exciting that these strangers have appeared.

I really enjoy your writing Pixie and look forward to reading a lot more from you. XXX

5 Stars from me.

another masterpiece by my little genius just what I needed this morning wonderful start to my day thank you

As Fabienne says: Teenagers! At least Amy seems to learn fast, unlike Elle who is still a bit too full of herself. And can I suggest that Amy is Rubenesque, not fat (far kinder). Has Fabienne found a new paramour in June? Don't keep your readership dangling too long to find out.

This episode oscillates between fucking and fucking up. As soon as a train of sensible thoughts concludes, sex happens, and with that, the sensible thoughts seem forgotten.

At least as far as the "normal" people are concerned.

Not so for Fabienne. Sexual desire never takes over, and her sexual actions are always thoughtful, intentional and deliberate. Even as she participates, she observes. She does not let herself get drawn into the whirlwind of arousal and declines any offer of orgasm.

Is it just because she feels different? She also knows that those inexperienced teenagers wouldn't know what it takes to satisfy her: more thoughtfulness, more finesse, more patience, as sexual arousal is more difficult for her than for "normal" girls.

But then again, your or my definition of normal depends on what you or I have seen and experienced. And so Fabienne meets June the bartender. A good bartender has observation and listening skills. Her pace and character suits Fabienne. So let's hope that this budding relationship does not get fucked up.

Are we ready for this? I think so with anticipation and apprehension. No turning back; love Elle’s journey. xxxxx

Thank you so much, darling Bobbi. Praise from you delights me, your own stories are superb xxxxx

Thank you, darling Cheryle, so glad you are enjoying it xxxxx

Darling Maonaigh, so glad you are enjoying it, and the next chapter is up tomorrow, so enjoy xxxxx

Thank you darling Wolfie - yes, the June scenario is going to develop, but first, we go back to see what Fabienne has been planning - enjoy xxxxx

Thank you, darling Migbird - and more to come tomorrow xxxxx

This was worth every day of waiting!

Fabienne is wonderful…Sexy, intelligent, playful, and loving! She is masterful in her relationships.

Your writing captures these complicated sexual dynamics with sensitivity and tough love, while maintaining a delightfully arousing eroticism.

Excellent!

I do like how Fabienne has taken a mentoring role with Amy. As Amy has more potential to be a good subject to train instead of the often Brat like immature Elle. This June beauty seems to be a welcomed retreat for Fabienne. Love the ending Pixie... the two blindfolded and not knowing who may may be walking in the door with Fabienne. May I suggest they both get humbled and Fabienne bring a couple of the Molly Boi's from down the street? * lil gigl

How inspiring and refreshing: Fabienne maintained her composure after being wounded by Elle's insensitive remarks and considered her resposibility as the teacher for Elle's struggles in grasping some of the more advanced concepts of D/s. And, despite her difficult self assessment, Fabienne, still didn't neglect her commitment to "help" Amy with her self-image issues when the moment presented itself. Of course then Amy's youthful impulsivity immediately sabotaged a golden opportunity for Elle to learn about D/s from a sub's perspective. *sigh* Hence Fabienne's mysterious texts to the unnamed person, which apparently was our intrepid teacher setting up a private tutoring seasion with Anne (and Elle.) Undoubtably Fabienne determined that group sessions with Elle, Amy, Penny, and herself were too chaotic / unpredictable, and not conducive to Elle's progress. I'm looking forward to the next session /chapter for many reasons; but mainly to see how Fabienne dommes the sexy mother and daughter, and how Elle deals with being on the submissive end of things. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

This just keeps getting better and better. And I see chapter 13 is already published! Just off to read that now.

Oh Paul, how very kind. I am so glad you like it xxxxx

Thank you, Erica, darling. I hope you will find the next chapter enlightening too. I am glad, but not surprised, that you noticed June, who will appear more in chapter 14 xxxxx

Thank you, Anonymous, and yes, Fabienne has, indeed, been conspiring - but the next chapter offers gleams of light xxxxx

Thank you, darling Olwen, I am pleased that it is doing its job for you *smiles* xxxxx

The task of teaching is often difficult. Sometimes the eagerness of the student out runs their experience, acquired knowledge, and more importantly their wisdom. Certainly Elle shows promise and natural talent, but talent without guidance, instruction, and even correction often leads astray. Elle is so fortunate to find a patient teacher who is willing to overcome Elle's natural headstrong inclinations. How many tears would be avoided if all had such a wonderful teacher as Fabienne.

Well done Pixie, as always a wonderful story continues in entertaining but also teaching, I am so looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you, darling Mama S - and you are a great teacher xxxxx

We Loved It. 🌹💋

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Hallo Pixie!

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This is truly a beautifully written passionate hot and sexy story, thank-you 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-More Orgasms... Ohhh Yes-yes-yes!

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Even when I was a teenager, growing up at the group home in Poysdorf Austria, I never sought out girls my own age, they were too giggly... no I was attracted to mature intelligent women like Fabienne or Penny, and of course Queen Jackie.

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From your two kinky dike friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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Thank you, my darlings, I am delighted that you both enjoyed it so much 💕💕💕❤️💋

Another lovely entry in this series. There was a somberness to it that I enjoyed. I love the warmth of Fabienne, how she goes with the flow. I like the cliffhanger at the end.

thank you so much, Elle xxxxx