All Comments on 'Ellie Submits Pt. 19'

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GortmundyGortmundy10 months ago

Very hot story. Loved how it has all the BDSM features and corporal punishment themes but never descends into brutality. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

lonequarklonequark10 months agoAuthor

Thank you! 🌹

HargaHarga10 months ago

It's been a long wait but well worth it. I had completely forgot about Ellie's power reversal attempt in the last chapter and her mistress was going to punish her. Not sure the punishment fits the crime. Now Ellie has roped (literally) her friends into this story and image that. They are both into it. 5*

EleafancEleafanc10 months ago

Amazing, as always. This is one of the only stories I wait on, and it's more then worth it. Thank you for not abandoning it! Looking forward to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This series is amazing lonequark. I keep clicking on your profile every week hoping to see a new chapter, and every single one you never disappoint. Although I do hope you won't be as cruel to us waiting for the next one as Miriam has been to Ellie. 😉

lonequarklonequark10 months agoAuthor

I have other writing projects going on at the same time as this, so it might be a similar wait until the next chapter appears. Thank you for reading.

james007bonfjames007bonf10 months ago

An excellent series with lots of variation. Can't wait to read the next chapter as you clearly have a talent. Thanks

rozrulez3rozrulez36 months ago

Looking forward to the next chapter where her roommate starts dominating Ellie, it would be a great turn on!

Ravey19Ravey194 months ago

Excellent. I think you've developed considerably as you've written this story. Added you to my favourites so I'll pick it up when you publish.

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