All Comments on 'Emily, The Good Time Girl Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Fine Story

This is a fine story. A version of Emily has occupied my fantasies as well and I look forward to further chapters. We need more stories about really slutty girls.

LadyJeanneLadyJeanneover 18 years ago
Marvelous!

Love the inner slut coming out stories. Delicious. Thanks, LJ

littletompepperlittletompepperabout 15 years ago
Brilliant

I loved this - finding her true vocation and inner happiness in slutdom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Good premise, but sloppy writing

Good premise, but sloppy writing. Were you typing with just one hand? Lots of room for improvement. Keep at it.

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