All Comments on 'Emma New Life (Black Femdom) Ch. 01'

proofreading would be a really good idea

I just love a topic like this and then I dont care about spelling and grammar that much. Thanks for creating filthy smut for us and maybe you continue this story this time...Emma will enjoy her role in the end with strong and ugly Bea - I am sure.

Not only is it first person; but the grammar, spelling and structure all combined to make this painful to read.

Don't get discouraged, but please get an editor to help with your writing and perhaps re-submit it once it has been fixed.

Continue to share your imagination - just please make it readable.

Loved the story. Was able to comprehend the story as written. I know that English is not your primary language, but I cannot speak another language so I happily read it as you write it. Hope you continue this story and many more.