All Comments on 'Ending a Sex Drought with a Flood'

by Sting1975

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AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

Decent premise.

But seriously rushed.

Needed lots more playing and getting to know each other's bodies.

Needed some reluctance that needed to be overcome rather than zoom ahead without any sort of concern.

Three stars.

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Straight male, living in Sydney Australia. Married with two kids aged 18 and 21. Always enjoyed reading erotic stores from way back. Just started writing some of my own stories and learning the craft. Harder than it looks!