All Comments on 'Erotic Rapture Touched the Sublime'

Good luck with the contest

Great story! And only your first. I could really feel the emotions from your words. I liked the sexy scenario. It would have been nice to see them get together again, even the next morning.

Wow, keep writing.

very well done for a first story

read so real , that it could happen so easy without all of the luggage as with other stories

That's a hell of a story Great job.. I like that it was not several pages,, short background, and right into the horney as hell meat and potatoes of the story. Appreciate the effort from a real word smith.. Thank you 5 outta 5 man..

Definitely a successful mood piece, and those are damned rare here. Thank you for a very pleasant read.

Great first story! Really hot!

You captured the essence of her control, her inclusiveness, and her giving nature perfectly. A great telling.

Good story!

4

Got any ice water? Dd

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A good first story. Best line: "We were all naked, and I felt naked."