All Comments on 'Eternal Penance?'

Very fun backstory for his arrival in a new and different world/time. Could be very entertaining launch for a new series. As always well written and a crisp clean read.

Vwey nice dtaer please continue 5 stars

Go ahead! Write a sequel! But also a prequel. The Valparaiso scene was delightful. Each location was very pretty.

I personally like the female angels more than the aliens (let's blame Sigourney), and if it were possible, I would like more female angels to help Robert understand his new role in this new world.

The future woman's orgasm seemed very fast to me; this is not a criticism but a question. Perhaps in that future/AU women take substances that enable them to orgasm faster (and thus, more often "selfish")?

In your other tales, devices that speed up, stop, or prevent orgasm often appear, so perhaps it might be possible to add a "substance" (spice, wine, skin cream) that helps women achieve selfish pleasure.

Oh... after the suspension dots... can you add a space... please? ;)