All Comments on 'Every Other Day Pt. 05'

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TwigsandwormsTwigsandwormsover 1 year ago

awesome next chapter!

sealandssdsealandssdover 1 year ago

So there are three “me”s?

HypersillyHypersillyover 1 year agoAuthor

What? Why did you say that?

sealandssdsealandssdover 1 year ago

Well, in my opinion, one is Matt's friend who realized he is being mind controlled, the other is being Matt's lover, and the last is Matt's slave.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

OMG please update more often!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please update I am going crazy waiting it is so good

HypersillyHypersillyover 1 year agoAuthor

Hey everyone. Sorry I haven't written anything in a while. Been busy n whatnot - but also not sure how to continue the story. Was thinking only one or two chapters more to end it. So I ask you - any ideas? What would you like to happen? Would love to get some help writing about getting my mind and will wiped away ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please more! I want to see him take it further, deeper.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Its already been to long, PLEASE more :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Just came. Need moar! Like sealandssd said, make him his full time slave as an ending. One long scene showing his final, depraved submission before his gives up control full time.

88girfriend88girfriend11 months ago

I would like to see a chapter in which Matt let's his slave go with full knowledge of what was done to him. The slave spends the week reviewing all the fun he has had with Matt and will then decide he wants to be Matt's good boy.

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