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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Very cool concept, you write well, but the way it's told I feel like I'm hearing about it from a friend, at least at the end. We need a proper scene with dialogue, tension, and details to make it vivid. I want to know what Stephanie says and thinks and feels, beat by beat.

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I like to dabble in erotic writing and tentacle art as a hobby. I primarily write and draw erotica about a fictional world populated by touch-telepathic aliens and the women they hang out with. All my characters are age 20 years or older. Please do NOT follow me or my posts...