All Comments on 'Exposing Elysa Ch. 05'

The story started out so promising, but as it went along it lost much of the sense of character, plot and subtleties that made it intriguing and erotic. Now we’re getting micro chapters that seem to be just fleeting portions of a larger story describing various sex acts; fairly dry and clinical. I will read on in hopes of experiencing the high quality writing and story that I found in the first chapter.