by Ocelotte
Love this, 5 Stars. Please write more, lots more on this story it has so much potential. There are many ways this story could go. Thanks for writing.
Next, how about Lily engage in some indecent adventures outdoors and all alone.
Wonderful story telling, excellent build up. Loved it. Hope you keep writing.
Yes! You will certainly have an audience for that story line ... trying to imagine how much one would have to vary the story line for the next chapter ....OR NOT . lol. well done !!!
Loved the story! Felt quite real and I sure wanted to be there. Hope you write more